Clear and Legible
Imagery works well with the text overall, but the change in photo from mobile to web is a little off-putting.
If you want the photos to change from mobile to web, then that should appy to all three quotes. In your mockups, two change photos when one does not.
Really enjoy the change in text color
Please don’t squeeze text like in “You fit me . . .” (it upsets the type gods)
Aesthetic throughout is clear and successful
Prefer when Lana Del Rey is on one line
Aesthetic is consistent, but try using the same color text for each quote (black, blue, pink)
Not sure if the Lana picture for "You fit me better . . " relates
Try to make sure the tone of the images match the quote on both phone and web (for example: the “We’re the masters . . ." image is black and white on mobile and color on web. This creates confusion and takes away from being cohesive.
Make sure you use the same 3 quotes (pictures can change as long as they match the theme and feel cohesive)
Use one form of justification (Left/right/center) You have one that uses left when the others are all center.
Check the quality of images (first image looks pixelated)
See how text could interact with imagery (it will need to touch Lana at some point)
Make sure the text color contrasts enough over Lana when acting responsive